Help a newbie with blattant, harsh and sadistic criticism.:)

Jason Buhalis · **Voice Talent** Joined: 09 Mar 2007 Posts: 8

Well, it is a tough life and bleah bleah bleah, but ya know what? I wanna get better, so if any of ya out there have some time, a desire and the energy to listen to my demo and give it ta me straight, I'd be really grateful to ya! Especially you veteran, salty dogs that have been sailin' the seven sound seas.... Arrrrrrr!!!

Thank yee varlets...

Jason

Marilyn Taylor · **Voice Talent** Joined: 30 Oct 2006 Posts: 400

Jason, I am not an expert but I know what I like...great voice, natural delivery and a good selection of reads...nice job. Marilyn

David K. Jones · **Voice Talent** Joined: 17 Aug 2005 Posts: 21

Jason,
Very Nice! Very modern sounding delivery. There are lots of clients out there that will want what you've got. Good luck!

Robert Jadah · **Voice Talent** Joined: 17 Jun 2005 Posts: 2627

I'm with Marilyn and David in agreeing that you've got the goods, Jason.
You'll be fine.

But don't make this your demo. Production-wise, it's sub-par;you simply must get hold of one of our production-pros to tweak it for you.You don't either want to have a client hit the STOP button as soon as you articulate 'preeeeesentation', and the Falcon bit should not be your lead-off bit.
I suggest you not rush into a demo. Most pros don't cut one until they are 18 months into the business; what's the hurry?
Aud a lot.
Keep the best.
Lead with what becomes your money voice (probably the third clip), and throw in some good variations.
Right now, I don't think you have enough of a collection from which to pick a Jason Top Ten.

Voice On!

Josef-Israel . · **Voice Talent** Joined: 09 Aug 2004 Posts: 14

Veteran, I'm not....but you have some nice material.

Keep up the good work Jason, & all the best with it...

I'm with Robert... "VOICE ON!"

Shalom

Josef-Israel http://www.voicespro.com/josef-israel
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