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Paul Boyd
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Joined: 14 Jan 2008
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2008, 23:55 (GMT)    Post subject: My first production..Feedback Please Reply with quote

Hi Paul Boyd .... here using Samson c03U and Audacity First shot at any production and Exposure! I would appreciate any thoughts...Paul


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Scott Pollak
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Joined: 05 Mar 2004
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 25, 2008, 01:30 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Holy cow... ANOTHER Atlantan?!

Well, Paul, for your FIRST time doing production, it isn't painfully bad.
But as a contender against the pros with whom you'll be doing battle here for voicework, it's pretty weak.

The biggest problem I have is with your delivery.
I went to your webpage here and found nothing regarding your background. Do you have any experience in voicework at all?

Your delivery is stilted, unnatural and - not to be mean - but what I would describe as mushmouthed. You're not speaking clearly at all.

Anyway, I didn't mean to sidetrack; you asked about the production quality and I gave you that. But honestly, if you're thinking about trying to give voicework a go, you have a long ways to go.

I truly wish you all the best.

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Paul Boyd
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 02, 2008, 01:30 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for your input Scott ... I appreciated it Greatly I will start using more warm up time to help enunciation ... Take a listen to my last post and see if you notice any improvement of diction
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