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Raj Rana
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 Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008, 06:08 (GMT) Post subject: My Voice! What do u Think? |
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hi friends i m new in here and to the voice industry too
please let me know what u guys think of my voice and how i can make it better !
http://voice123.com/rajrana
Thank You
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Melba Sibrel
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| Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008, 21:32 (GMT) Post subject: |
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While I do not speak Hindi, and I know nothing about the market in India...I have to say I like the sound of your attached spots and was surprised at how much meaning I could glean simply from the way you use your voice.
The serious "Cry" spot -- seemed well-paced and restrained, reflecting the obvious seriousness of the appeal, but not manipulative or melodramatic.
The other two spots -- wacky and animated -- lots of fun with character. Not quite the approach I'm used to hearing in American media, but obviously what works where you are.
I hope you do really well!
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Raj Rana
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| Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008, 17:12 (GMT) Post subject: |
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| Melba Sibrel wrote: | While I do not speak Hindi, and I know nothing about the market in India...I have to say I like the sound of your attached spots and was surprised at how much meaning I could glean simply from the way you use your voice.
The serious "Cry" spot -- seemed well-paced and restrained, reflecting the obvious seriousness of the appeal, but not manipulative or melodramatic.
The other two spots -- wacky and animated -- lots of fun with character. Not quite the approach I'm used to hearing in American media, but obviously what works where you are.
I hope you do really well! |
Thank you very much.
very true, here in India we have a very different approach.
By the way i m also posting the Hindi Scripts translated in English for your Reference.
Best Wishes to u too.
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Raj Rana
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| Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008, 17:13 (GMT) Post subject: |
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here i am posting the Hindi script translated in English for the earlier posted samples
1. Listerene Mouth Wash
Plot :
A guy day dreaming about his dreamgirl
Script:
Character Voice:
Closer... Closer.... More Close.
When will my Dream come true.
Why doesnt she come close to me.
But my heart still says..
Even she Loves me.
But then why is the distance!!!!!!!!!
VoiceOver:
Now get rid of the Distance
New Listerene Mouth wash.
Your Refreshing breath will bring her very close!
2: Cry Relief Fund
Do u ever wish to forget your Childhood, the fairytales......the toys.
Would they ever want to remember their Childhood, the hunger....the poverty.
Will u help us in making their childhood remarkable.
Cry Relief Fund
Shaping up Lives, Fulfilling Dreams
Hope now the samples would be a lil easier to understand
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Melba Sibrel
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| Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008, 17:22 (GMT) Post subject: |
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You had some really nice copy to work with. I understand the pacing on the Listerine spot much better now.
In the US, there are some companies running TV spots that pattern and parody the European and Asian approach to advertising. It's almost like a new genre. I find the spots engaging and clever.
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Raj Rana
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| Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008, 14:28 (GMT) Post subject: |
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| Melba Sibrel wrote: | You had some really nice copy to work with. I understand the pacing on the Listerine spot much better now.
In the US, there are some companies running TV spots that pattern and parody the European and Asian approach to advertising. It's almost like a new genre. I find the spots engaging and clever. |
Well yeah here in India we really have great innovative scripts to work on. India is a big country with lots of different culture, religion and people so a huge range to work on
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Melba Sibrel
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| Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008, 15:55 (GMT) Post subject: |
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| Yep! 5000 years or so of civilization will do that!
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