NEw Auto COMM

Paul Boyd · **Voice Talent** Joined: 14 Jan 2008 Posts: 16

Hi Please listen to easygoing Auto Comm Please let me know how it works

Lance Blair · Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2008, 16:01 (GMT) Post subject:

Well, it technically doesn't work as a commercial because even if I cut it tightly around your speaking it's a 69 second spot which is too long. In some of it you make a connection with the listener, but much of it sounds like you're reading off of something you've just been handed. It's a good script for you though, keep at it!

Paul Boyd · **Voice Talent** Joined: 14 Jan 2008 Posts: 16

Thanks Lance for your advise and critique it is a ppreciated and I willl keepa practicin....PAUL

Sid Whatley · Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2008, 01:45 (GMT) Post subject:

Hi Paul. As a 30 yr. veteran of national, regional and local automotive spots I must say it's different. It leans toward a national soft-sell delivery and it's a delivery I have not heard yet. Be different or be average. Your voice caught my attention and I stayed with the spot as I imagined hearing it on network tv. Watch your mixes....the music was a little too loud. I would be intresting in hearing more in this vein with some excellent copy.

Paul Boyd · **Voice Talent** Joined: 14 Jan 2008 Posts: 16

Hey Sid Thanks much appreciate your thoughts