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Phew! It's done - any feedback please? Much appreciated.

 
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Colin Day
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 15, 2007, 15:58 (GMT)    Post subject: Phew! It's done - any feedback please? Much appreciated. Reply with quote

Hi there

It's so very difficult to get any sense of perspective on your own work... I'd appreciate any comments, feedback, good, bad, indifferent, but honest.

Thanks so much in advance.

Dayo (UK)



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Amy Snively
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 15, 2007, 16:18 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh dear goodness! I love it! I don't know anything about production issues, so I can't comment there. I will say that's some awesome copy! Great choices of spots, and the perfect order, and the performances are spot on! Super!
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Todd Ellis
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 15, 2007, 16:31 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Colin - I think you should get out of voiceover work completely - that's right dump the whole idea - You are too good, and I am afraid of you. And - you make the ladies swoon (see above). I think the demo is awesome - but MAYBE a bit long. The smooth, suave delivery is obviously your forte - but there is a lot of it in there - I feel you have more range and you should show it.
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Victor Harris
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 15, 2007, 16:59 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Colin,

Awesome! Wink
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Lynne Alston
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 15, 2007, 17:05 (GMT)    Post subject: Home. Reply with quote

Wow Colin, makes me think of home, all those commercials, sounds like the REAL thing.

Great showcase.

Lynne
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Colin Day
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 16, 2007, 09:43 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for your comments guys. Much appreciated. Anyone else chip in?

Colin

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Joe J Thomas
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 16, 2007, 15:13 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

I liked it Colin. Nice mix of moods and styles. The Staples spot is my favorite.

Joe J Thomas
www.JoeActor.com

p.s. they still make Bryl-cream?
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Colin Day
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 16, 2007, 15:47 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Joe J Thomas wrote:
I liked it Colin. Nice mix of moods and styles. The Staples spot is my favorite.

Joe J Thomas
www.JoeActor.com

p.s. they still make Bryl-cream?


Thanks Joe - great pic on your avatar!

Yes they do make brylcreem - here's a link http://www.brylcreem.co.uk/

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George Karnes
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 17, 2007, 05:12 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Colin-
This is just a hobby for you right? When are you going to take something seriously in your career?

If you think this is going to get you any jobs, you are right!

Todd may have a point about you widening your repetoire, but speaking for others mainly myself, I hope you just stick with the smooth suave thing. There are others here who want to get a job too.

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Colin Day
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 17, 2007, 09:55 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

George Karnes wrote:
Colin-
This is just a hobby for you right? When are you going to take something seriously in your career?

If you think this is going to get you any jobs, you are right!

Todd may have a point about you widening your repetoire, but speaking for others mainly myself, I hope you just stick with the smooth suave thing. There are others here who want to get a job too.

Cheers,


Me suave? Chuckling - that's a pretty smooth post George! Thanks for that.

I think Todd may have a point though, and although I don't really get a long with high energy screaming copy, I'm trying to search out something that has a tad more punch. Could be another remix on the cards...

Colin

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Khristine Hvam
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 19, 2007, 07:42 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Now you're just showin' off!

I think i learned more listening to this demo than i did taking any kind of voice over seminar! Great Stuff... but you know that...

muah!
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 19, 2007, 14:24 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hvam wrote:
Now you're just showin' off!

I think i learned more listening to this demo than i did taking any kind of voice over seminar! Great Stuff... but you know that...

muah!


Khristine

That's the sweetest thing to say, but truth is I'm just as insecure, paranoid and nervous of my talent as many rookies. Embarassed Embarassed

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 19, 2007, 14:30 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Colin - I am "insecure, paranoid and nervous of (your) talent" as well
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