Another try

Cameron Thomas · **Voice Talent** Joined: 06 Dec 2006 Posts: 479

Not trying to be a pain, but I'm constantly tweaking my demos. I've subbed in another quick snippet to the main mix and wanted to get your opinion on them. I have an idea of areas to improve...just want to see if your critiques support it.

Thanks in advance.

Cheers,
Cameron

George Karnes · **Voice Talent** Joined: 26 Dec 2006 Posts: 905

Cameron-
I really like the first piece.

Then I lose your voice on the second two. You vocal is way down there.

I like your vocal on the dental piece but I don't think the music is right.

I think Radio Imaging is supposed to be on a different demo.

I just wish I could do a demo as good as yours.

Hope that helps.

Victor Harris · Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007, 21:04 (GMT) Post subject:

The first bit is very nice and the "SmallSmiles" bit also nice. All others need more work.

Robert Jadah · **Voice Talent** Joined: 17 Jun 2005 Posts: 2627

I agree with Vic, though the last radio bits were usable too.
Work On!

Cameron Thomas · **Voice Talent** Joined: 06 Dec 2006 Posts: 479

Thanks for your replies gentlemen--that definately helps narrow down my weak areas. I'm still trying to hunt down a decent sound library--for now I'm scraping by with a few bits here and there. I'll keep plugging away though.

I've heard a lot your demos too--I wish I could add some input but they're all sooo good.

Thanks again and good luck. Cheers.

Cameron