commercial demo

Steve Singer · Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007, 15:29 (GMT) Post subject: commercial demo

looking for feedback.

Matthew Hinman · Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007, 01:19 (GMT) Post subject:

Sounds like the real thing!

Keith D. Milby · Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007, 01:31 (GMT) Post subject:

OK,

I am better a catching technical glitches and not so much on judging the overall effectiveness of the demo, so here goes.

It sounded as though you were a little hot on the back track on the first spot and then their was an obvious lowering of the volume past that which also took down your voice.

Check me, and if need be I would fix that. The rest of it sounded good. Just wack off that long silence at the end.

My 2 cents and it is probably not even worth that.

Scott Pollak · Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007, 04:22 (GMT) Post subject:

Steve,

Nice demo, very professional, nice variety of both voices, styles, energies, etc. Listening thru headphones I also noticed a bit of variation in the volume level on a couple of spots, most notably right at the begining of the hot and spicy piece, you started out at a good level then it dropped noticeably down.

The Bayer aspirin spot sounded a bit 'lispy' to me.
Also would have liked to hear a slate taking us into and out of the demo. As professional as this sounds, overall, it needs that finishing touch.

Good length on the demo, too. I like it. Good job!