Any improvement since last time?

Roger Tremaine · Roger Tremaine General Demo 2-26-08.mp3

I posted a demo several months ago and got some really terrific feedback and advice from the folks here.
Let's see if any of it is reflected in these new installments.
Thanks in advance for your comments...good or bad, there all useful.
-roger

Melba Sibrel · Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2008, 05:35 (GMT) Post subject:

You have a nice range. But you know what? The spot I think may be strongest is too far down....the checklist clip is what I'm talking about. It's much more interesting and ear-catching than the Golf Digest spot, in my opinion. I'd put that one at the front. And your last clip isn't really that strong, I don't think. It seems out of place somehow. You probably don't need it or might could find a tender family man type read to replace it with.

Also....and this may seem like a nit-pick, but it might stick out to potential clients, too...is the /j/ sound in front of "you" on the podcast clip. I know it happens in spontaneous speech, but I can't fathom why. There's no justification for it.

Other than, that, I like your "general" reel pretty well. Didn't listen to the narrative.

Roger Tremaine · Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2008, 13:42 (GMT) Post subject:

Melba,
Thanks for your time and comments. All excellent points, duly noted.
-roger