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Roger Tremaine
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Joined: 13 Feb 2007
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 31, 2008, 04:03 (GMT)    Post subject: Change(s) and hope Reply with quote
Made some alterations in my narration demo.
Please listen and share your expertise.
Thanks,
-roger

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Melba Sibrel
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Joined: 22 Dec 2004
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 03, 2008, 00:35 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote
Hmmm. I'm not a bit narratives reel fan anyway (mine least of all) so take what I'll say with a grain of salt.

The first clip was pretty good. The "cowboy" vibe of the second clip kind of turned me off, though...and after that I just felt like I was hearing the same guy doing the narrator voice he thinks he's supposed to do. Some of it was sing songy and sounded forced. I couldn't feel connected to what you were saying because I wasn't sure you were. You know? I hate to say that 'cause, if I recall correctly, I sorta dug your commercial reel.

It's just okay. I don't know what to tell you to make it more wow-inducing. Maybe let more of your personality come through...tell me a story.
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