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Stan McFarland
Voice Talent



Joined: 16 Oct 2006
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 25, 2006, 23:39 (GMT)    Post subject: ok, hit me - i can take it. Reply with quote

http://stanmcfarland.voice123.com/

I just joined a few days ago - people have been after me for years to do voice over work, so I though I'd try it. I've done public speaking for years, but this is somewhat new to me.

Feedback is much appreciated.

Thanks!
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Paxton Greene
Voice Talent



Joined: 31 Oct 2005
Posts: 91

PostPosted: Wed Oct 25, 2006, 23:58 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey Stan!

I think you have a good voice, but my suggestion as a producer to you would be to do a few different types of reads with different energies. Perhaps do a faster read, one with more energy, one that's somber, etc.. Best to you.

Pax
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Stan McFarland
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Joined: 16 Oct 2006
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 26, 2006, 01:18 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for the feedback - I *really* appreciate it. I've been trying to do some better demos - I hope to work on them this weekend. Thanks again!
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Chip Hinshaw
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Joined: 23 Feb 2006
Posts: 65

PostPosted: Thu Oct 26, 2006, 04:08 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

You have a nice voice, Stan, but your demo cuts sound a little too "read". Paxton's advice is on the money. I'm a broken record with this today, but if you haven't had any coaching you should give it a try -- the right coach can bring you a long way.
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Patrick Willis
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Joined: 17 Mar 2006
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 26, 2006, 05:13 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think your voice has great potential. It's crisp and clear... one thing, take the bourbon one off... the first one is fabulous...
I'd go with Chip... get a coach, they are invaluable and can guide you through some rough patches. I've been doing this work for 15 years and learn something new about my voice/style every week. I was lucky enough to have a great coach during my acting years and still see her every 6 months or so, she's been a great boon in my life.
Don't stop.
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Dustin Ebaugh
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Joined: 21 Apr 2006
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 31, 2006, 07:08 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Stan: You have a great voice! Some of your reads are bit staccato. If you were able to smooth them out a bit, they would sound more professional, I think. Agree with the advice above too, a coach is one of the best things you can have. You have great potential. I hope you use it. Smile
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