Free Forums for the Voice Industry & Community |
|
 |
| View previous topic :: View next topic |
| Author |
|Message |
Paul R. Martin Voice Talent
Joined: 11 Mar 2007 Posts: 14
|
Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007, 22:14 (GMT) Post subject: P.R. Martin - Sound Bites. HELP, which stay/go, order?! |
|
|
Hello all.
I have a demo currently on my site: http://voice123.com/prmartin
but upon reflection and feedback, it seems to 'play one note' more than I like. I'd like to feature my 'money voice' but also demonstrate some variety as well.
Help with feedback on which elements to keep, drop, how to sequence them would be greatly appreciated. Remember this is a really SCRATCH demo so the sound quality is not up to snuff for some at this point.
| Description: |
|
 Download |
| Filename: |
SCRATCH.mp3 |
| Filesize: |
1.29 MB |
| Downloaded: |
70 Time(s) |
|
|
| Back to top |
|
Sid Whatley Voice Talent - Voice Seeker

Joined: 09 Nov 2003 Posts: 685
|
Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007, 23:56 (GMT) Post subject: |
|
|
| The first thing is to take out all of the dead spaces. Edit them back-to-back with no silence. The spots themselves sound really great.....
|
|
| Back to top |
|
Paul R. Martin Voice Talent
Joined: 11 Mar 2007 Posts: 14
|
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007, 01:07 (GMT) Post subject: |
|
|
The dead spaces are intentional for now. Just want to give people a chance to listen to each one individually to consider drop/add/sequencing evaluations.
Thanks for the feedback on the clips themsevles... they all do sound good for what they are, that is why I am looking for feecback on what to do with them now
| Sid Whatley wrote: | | The first thing is to take out all of the dead spaces. Edit them back-to-back with no silence. The spots themselves sound really great..... |
|
|
| Back to top |
|
Debbie Deutsch Voice Talent

Joined: 25 Oct 2006 Posts: 1338
|
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007, 01:38 (GMT) Post subject: |
|
|
Good Voice! underwear is great!
Satan smiles....great chuckle...what is that woman's voice doing there, confusing??!!
More of superhero/dad voice bit....seemed way too brief!
Phone company music seems loud?
_________________ Debbie Deutsch
www.seattlestorytelling.org/storytellers/seattle_storytellers.html
The tale is often wiser than the teller
- Shadow Spinner
Last edited by Debbie Deutsch on Thu Jul 26, 2007, 01:40 (GMT); edited 1 time in total |
|
| Back to top |
|
Colin Campbell Voice Talent - Voice Seeker Moderator

Joined: 27 Feb 2006 Posts: 5287
|
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007, 01:40 (GMT) Post subject: |
|
|
I could make a hell of a demo out of that.
Sorry for the shameless self-promotion.
_________________ www.ColinCampbellVoice.com
Member SaVoa... #07040... www.SaVoa.org |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
You cannot post new topics in this forum You cannot reply to topics in this forum You cannot edit your posts in this forum You cannot delete your posts in this forum You cannot vote in polls in this forum You cannot attach files in this forum You can download files in this forum
|
|