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Lee Gordon Voice Talent

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Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2008, 22:33 (GMT) Post subject: |
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| David Bosco wrote: | | I missed the chance I had to do this one, so it's just for fun ... the Hershey Baseball Character |
David -- That was great. I definitely see what you mean about going slower. I would have, if I thought I could have pulled it off the way you did.
Lots of really good stuff here so far this week.
Kent -- Very nice job on the Frontline Phantoms. It wasn't exactly "spooky" but it was ominous, which is what I think the seekers were actually looking for despite not being able to come up with the appropriate word to describe what they wanted (not an uncommon occurance).
Cira -- The usual great job on your Paper Cuts spot. You really captured that Sally Struthers tone of desperation, although I think the real Sally is also a bit whinier.
Deby -- The Iron Chef parody was superb. I hope the fact that Ohta and Kevin Brauch are men doesn't work against you. (Maybe they'll remember that Sissy Biggers was the floor reporter on Iron Chef USA.)
Michael -- I think your Fox and Grapes read was exactly what a kids' story should sound like.
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Scott Pollak Voice Talent - Voice Seeker

Joined: 05 Mar 2004 Posts: 3828
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Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008, 00:30 (GMT) Post subject: |
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| Dave DeAndrea wrote: |
Not entirely true... mine has been opened but unrated as of yet. Average is 4.9.  |
Actually, I'm with you, Dave. Opened, but no rating.
However I DID get a 5 on the Grave Digger spot!
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John M. Thomas Voice Talent

Joined: 24 Apr 2005 Posts: 139
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Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008, 00:35 (GMT) Post subject: One from TOS |
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Here's one from TOS. I don't normally submit produced pieces, but I love this stuff and would live to land one!
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Jacob Keebler Voice Talent

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Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008, 00:45 (GMT) Post subject: |
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Geezum John,
I forgot how deep you are. Nice job.
Sorry. Jakey can't come out and play today he is sick with the same G*%$-amn, $%-king, Piece of Sh%#@ cold that he has had Three mutha fu-#$*-ing times this winter...
Miss you guys.
-J
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James Lorenz Voice Talent

Joined: 28 Feb 2007 Posts: 254
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Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008, 01:42 (GMT) Post subject: |
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wow, going against some awesome reads from Kent and John. Great production too, John!
Something a little different for me, but gave it a shot.
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Scott Pollak Voice Talent - Voice Seeker

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Colin Campbell Voice Talent - Voice Seeker Moderator

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Deby Cedars Voice Talent

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Thom Wilkins Voice Talent

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Cira Larkin - Studio 53 Voice Talent

Joined: 08 Nov 2006 Posts: 497
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Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008, 05:12 (GMT) Post subject: |
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| Lee Gordon wrote: |
Cira -- The usual great job on your Paper Cuts spot. You really captured that Sally Struthers tone of desperation, although I think the real Sally is also a bit whinier.
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Thanks, Lee! I purposely held back on the whining because I tend to hit seekers over the head with my antics. But what fun it was!
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David Bosco Voice Talent

Joined: 06 Sep 2007 Posts: 281
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Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008, 12:48 (GMT) Post subject: |
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Deby:
The chorus of "Why Can't This Be Love?" is in a Major key. It may be in A but I'm not sure. (If I had my keyboard out of the crate, I could tell you)
Your vocal certainly sounds like a Major key.
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Scott Pollak Voice Talent - Voice Seeker

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Cira Larkin - Studio 53 Voice Talent

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Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008, 16:47 (GMT) Post subject: Wilma Flintstone |
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OK, this is one I got yesterday. I asked Colin "Bat Ears" Campbell to critique my Wilma Flintstone and asked him if I was delusional to submit this. He told me to go for it. I don't like how I said "in the kitchen", and I also think Wilma's register is a bit lower--but, oh, well--it's too late now.
Lee, you are my best/worst critic-- so let's hear it!
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David Oxford Voice Talent

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David Bosco Voice Talent

Joined: 06 Sep 2007 Posts: 281
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Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2008, 17:59 (GMT) Post subject: |
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Cira:
If you're going for the original voice of Wilma Flintstone (Jean Vander Ply) the one you have now is too sweet and inviting to my ear. The original was a lot more nasal and with much harder 'R's, almost breaking 'Fred' into two sylables. Add a little bit of Alice Cramden to what you've got now, and I think you'll have it. (The Flintstones was loosely based on The Honeymooners anyway)
Now that's if they want the original Wilma Flintstone. They might want something similar, only more appealing in a new voice for Wilma. But with such a pleasant voice as yours, Fred may never want to leave the cave!
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