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Michael J Hall
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 Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2008, 02:12 (GMT) Post subject: new demo |
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Hello,
If anyone finds the time I would appreciate any type of critique on this demo. So fire away !
Thank you Michael J
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Scott Pollak
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| Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2008, 02:55 (GMT) Post subject: |
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Michael, it's a GREAT spot, terrificly-voiced, nicely done. I love it.
But it's not a demo. A demo is a short composite of bits and bytes of your stuff.
And I'd love to hear more of your stuff!
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Michael J Hall
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| Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2008, 04:18 (GMT) Post subject: reply |
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WOW, thank you Scott, I really appreciate that. I wonder from time to time if I am heading in the right direction. Sure I would like you to hear more. Should I post some more files or you can check out my voice123 site.
Best regards, Michael J
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Michael J Hall
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| Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2008, 04:31 (GMT) Post subject: additional spots |
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Here are a couple of extra spots
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Michael J Hall
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| Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2008, 04:35 (GMT) Post subject: new spots |
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This has a brief biography and a poem of the artist read by me.
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Michael J Hall
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| Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2008, 17:21 (GMT) Post subject: one more |
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ANYONE WHO WOULD LIKE TO CRITQUE THESE SPOTS ...PLEASE DO...THANKS AGAIN.
MICHAEL J HALL
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Michael J Hall
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| Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2008, 14:53 (GMT) Post subject: more demos |
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Scott,
I was wondering if yoou had a chance to listen to the other spots or take a peek at my site? Mike
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John Weeks
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| Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2008, 16:47 (GMT) Post subject: |
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Hi Michael,
Here's a short example of what Scott was saying.
You need to take short clips (8-10 secs) of spots and piece them together to show your different styles. The total length should be about 1 minute.
You'll need a seperate demo for spots, training, documentaries, on-hold etc.
Good Luck,
John
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Michael J Hall
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| Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2008, 18:19 (GMT) Post subject: |
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Hi John,
Thank you very much, how do the other samples sound if you get the chance ?
Best regards,
MIchael J
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John Weeks
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| Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2008, 18:33 (GMT) Post subject: |
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I think the Mustang spot is the best by far.
The Singleton's spot sounds a bit stilted. By that, I mean I think you are over annunciating. Try it with the same tone but try to be more conversational.
The Honda spot sounded a little muffled as compared to the others.
The leisuremix piece has some noise in it.
That being said, I think you have a great voice and all you really need to do is work on not over annunciating and being more conversational.
Good Luck!
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