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Dave DeAndrea
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 05, 2008, 19:53 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mel (may I call you Mel?)

No debate intended... I wrote before seeing your comment. Your post just happen to sneak in before mine. I wasn't reacting to your comments... simply stating a truth I've discovered when asking opinions on my own demos. You get lots of opinions... apply what rings true and move on. Very Happy

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Doug Parks
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 05, 2008, 20:01 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

OK, I'm starting to like this. Now Dave, are you saying you think I should keep or redo the NFL piece?
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Melba Sibrel
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 05, 2008, 20:12 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Laughing I know, Dave...we were typing at the same time. Yep, call me Mel (many folks do) or anything that wouldn't embarrass my mother.

Doug likes this. Hmmm. Go turn on Hannity and Colmes, Doug. Come back later and we'll tell you what we've decided you should do with your career. Laughing
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Dave DeAndrea
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 05, 2008, 20:12 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Melba made some good points... the voice sounds muddy and a little dated. The music injected a good change up though. Perhaps you could revoice it or something similar (with a little more passion) and get a cleaner recording.

Gotta roll... the fam and I are gonna watch the new Veggie Tales video. fliehen

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Doug Parks
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 05, 2008, 20:17 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks again guys. Veggie Tales? Oh, to live just one day as Dave...
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