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Lance Blair
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PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008, 18:09 (GMT)    Post subject: New Character Demo Reply with quote

Here's a new character demo - thanks for listening, and I look forward to your critique and advice.


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Maxine Dunn
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PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008, 18:54 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

WOW!!

I had no idea you had this kind of range! Really, really, really, good. Great diversity, rich, deep voices, perfect accents.... I love it. And it really moves along which is wonderful. Never a dull moment!

Bravo Lance, this is awesome!

Max
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ricevoice




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PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008, 20:18 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great stuff Lance!

As a production guy, I do have one minor nit to pick on the editing of the piece as a whole... there were a number of spots where the transitions were rather harsh and I could hear a click where one clip ended and the next began. It sounds like it was done on a 2 track editor as opposed to multi-track. I don't know what your production background is but if you like I'd be happy to help.

But, again, it's a minor nit.... I really enjoyed the performances and I like the pacing and sequence of the demo.

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Lance Blair
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PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008, 20:25 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks...It was done on a multi track editor, but I the pieces are just slammed/snapped together on one stereo track. I wanted to get some feedback before I polished it off.
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ricevoice




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PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008, 22:37 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

I had a feeling it was a rough draft but wanted to mention it just in case... sorry if I offended, wasn't sure what your production/editing background was.
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Lance Blair
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PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008, 23:18 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ah, no offense at all you were very helpful and tactful and that's the very sort of input I was looking for.
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Melba Sibrel
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PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008, 23:57 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lance, for the first time ever, I wish I was all thumbs. So I could give you 11 thumbs up. (Don't ask)
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Maxine Dunn
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PostPosted: Sat May 03, 2008, 00:03 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm with Melba! I didn't hear a click or a single-solitary-thing that was out of place.... This *%&$!)* ROCKS! All thumbs up.

Very, very, nice. And an inspiration to the rest of us who wish we had the chops for character.....

xox
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Todd Ethridge
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PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2008, 18:37 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great demo!

I wish I had more versatility like that. I only have a couple.

Nice work, Lance!
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John Weeks
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PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2008, 23:07 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great stuff Lance!
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Jacob Ekstroem
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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008, 13:51 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh, it was alright, I guess.....







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Lance Blair
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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008, 22:47 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for the comments, it means a lot coming from each of you.

Chris was right, I found a whole bunch of nastiness in there that I believe have been pruned (I knew there was some, but man). Is it good to go now?



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Jacob Ekstroem
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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008, 23:16 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Transitions are definitely smoother... but I still hate it Wink
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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008, 23:19 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, that's much better... sounds fantastic! And like I said before, the content and delivery is a home run... lots of range and versatility on display and it really flows together well.

Good, good stuff! 2 daumen hoch

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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008, 23:27 (GMT)    Post subject: Reply with quote

Smooooth!
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