Give it to me. I want raw, harsh criticism.

Andy Dennis · **Voice Talent** Joined: 17 Oct 2005 Posts: 3

You read the title. Now GO for it!

http://andydennis.co.uk/characterdemo.mp3

http://andydennis.co.uk/commercialdemo.mp3

Scott Pollak · Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2006, 21:01 (GMT) Post subject:

Can't give it to you if we can't hear the demos. Neither link worked for me.

Chip Hinshaw · **Voice Talent** Joined: 23 Feb 2006 Posts: 65

Correct links:

http://andydennis.co.uk/audio/characterdemo.mp3

http://andydennis.co.uk/audio/commercialdemo.mp3

EDIT: BTW, nice site and great demos, Andy. You really don't need much advice here. You could think about a little quicker pacing on the commercial reel -- maybe clip some of your spots a bit. The ACD phone bit was somewhat odd or oddly placed -- I can't quite decide which.

Also, one of your spots mid-way through the commercial reel sounded like you were trying to force your voice below its bottom barrier. Actually, I heard that a couple of times in your demos. Makes it sound like you're trying to talking without breathing.

But, all this is just in my opinion (which, again, is redeemable for about $0.01).

Paxton Greene · **Voice Talent** Joined: 31 Oct 2005 Posts: 91

Awesome Andy! Great reads and energy. You're going to do great!

Pax

Rodney Dean · **Voice Talent** Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Posts: 6

The only bad thing I can say is that I had to go to your voice123 profile to hear you, both of the links don't work. Your demo is great, keep that english accent!
Rodney Dean
I AM Canadian!
www.rodneydean.com

Chip Hinshaw · **Voice Talent** Joined: 23 Feb 2006 Posts: 65

I think the corrected links I posted in my first reply should work.